Question by : Lyrics? Opinions wanted.?
here's an additional song. it is about my panic attacks i get, so hence the title.
Panic
My thoughts goes numb
as my forehead closes in.
This headache will not escape me.
The rooms spins,
and now I cannot see.
Tears falling down,
choke upon choke,
this shaking is controlling me,
Oh the discomfort!-deep inside my throat.
I'm sinking, I am sinking
This globe I can not see,
living for, any longer
Exactly where is my angel now?
I am sinking, I'm sinking
This planet I can not see,
living for, any longer
Where is my angel now?
Every time I feel of you,
and how it utilized to be,
it appears like I am locked outside
of all my memories.
Believe me when I tell you
I still adore you even more
But save me now
save me now!
You have got to fucking save me now!!
(Silence)..........
I wake up,
the needles in my arms,
physicians all around me,
keeping me from harm.
I hear the murmers:
"Is he ok?"
"Will he ever be secure?"
but I know for confident
this illness is right here to stay.
I may not be a medical doctor,
but my heart is often right,
i look about and identified
she by no means came around,
so round two begins tonight!
I'm sinking, I am sinking
This planet I can not see,
living for, any longer
Where is my angel now?
I'm sinking, I am sinking
This globe I can not see,
living for, anymore
Exactly where is my angel now?
I am sinking, I am sinking
This globe I can not see,
living for, any longer
Where is my angel now?
Where's my angel now?
Where's my angel now?
Where's my angel now?
I enjoy her,
and I need to have her.
My back's against the wall,
death staring me in the eyes.
I do not think I can take this alone,
I want you here,
beside me now,
I can't do this alone.
Where's my angel now?
Where's my angel now?
Where's my angel now?
You'll always see what a regret it was,
to just leave me be.
i comprehend about the curse word in the song, but i felt it was neccessary considering that when i'm getting these attacks i get really worked up to the point exactly where i want action now, and i just wanted to bring that element out.
and if a person could please tell me how this is cliche? i do not fairly realize. i guess panic attacks are cliche now, everyone has them. wow, some people shouldn't talk.
another new rule. if you're going to critisize my lyrics, first it need to be constructive critisizism, not bashing, and second you have to explain exactly what you really feel requirements altered, not the reality that "you can't hum it", since you most likely cannot since i haven't made it into a song however. these are lyrics, just words. thanks to every person who comments with their minds, and are intelligent.
Greatest answer:
Answer by Cyndel
ok i seriously thing its very good lyrics and it shows what your feeling inside which is actually good thinking about thats what music is all about.i just believe that u dont want the cuss word in the song other than that ...its a truly good song.
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